Will you go to my Myspace page and post a comment about my poem? (It's under "Interests, General") I am thinking about writing lyrics for bands, but I need to know if my words are any good first...Here is a link to my page.
http://www.myspace.com/dirtysatanist666
Your comments are greatly appreciated. Plus, the person who gives me the most honest, helpful comment gets 10 points!
Myspace page?
You have good writing skills and I love the way you rhyme, but if I heard a song with those words, I would not want to listen to it because it's too violent. That's just my opinion but you should write what you feel because you are very talented. Just because I would not listen to it, doesn't mean that it won't make a good song. Everyone has their own choice of music. Good Luck!
Myspace page?
wow..i think its really good..it would make a great song. you should deffinitly write lyrics for bands
Myspace page?
Well it's dark. But its almost like you were trying too hard to make it dark. Does that make sense? Anyway it was a good poem. I don't see it as a song to be honest. But songs are not the easiest things to write. I write songs. www.myspace.com/doubleoverjack
Keep up the good work though. Remember don't try to be anything just be yourself and let it flow.
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